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You are my day and my night. You are the golden rays of sunlight and the silver streams of moonlight that light my way through the darkest of times....you are my dreams when I sleep at night...my hopes when I wake the next day.

Sometimes...when I find myself alone in this cold cold world...when I'm lying awake at night, staring at my dark ceiling, I think of you...and I can't help but smile in awesome wonder. I pinch myself every morning and every night, pondering how in the world I could be so lucky as to have found someone like you. Someone, who against all odds, continues to hold my heart in their arms at night. I've been waiting so long...wanting, wishing, dreaming, and praying....for someone like you.

You are my angel and my devil. My joy and my sorrow. My courage and my fear. My greatest strength, and my greatest weakness. I live for you and I would die for you. For you are my heart. And without you...I would not live.

Forgive me....for my stupidity, my anxiousness, my forgetfulness, and my clumsiness. I am stupid because I am dumbfounded by your continued presence at my side. I am anxious because I cannot express my feelings for you in a way that satisfies my heart. I am forgetful because I cannot think of anything else but the countdown until I hear your sweet voice again. And I am clumsy, because every day I'm with you is another day I fall for you all over again.

You are my diamond in the rough. You are my star in the night sky. You are the twinkle in my eye when I wake up each day. You are the smile that never leaves my face and the tears that I shed when you're in pain. You are the warmth I carry with me in the coldest of times, and the wind beneath my wings.

When I found you, I found something to protect.

You are my princess.
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Um....yeah...
So this is my first ever piece of poetry. I mean...would you even call this poetry? I dunno...I don't know much about poetry. ^^;

Not a whole lot to say... (is really too embarrassed/shy to say much) ....I wrote this completely spontaneously because I received a heavy dose of...inspiration.... :blush:

No, it's nothing like that! >.< Pervs...

It's love. :love:

*blushes* Yeah....I said it....you all read it right. And I'm not afraid to admit it. ^_^ I'm in love. And it doesn't take a rocket scientist to figure out who with. XD


This is for my Sunshine :sun:
~ :rose: :heart: :iconvixentfox: :heart: :rose: ~
:iconiloveyouplz:

~~~~:blushes: Her response : Link~~~~

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:iconsubaku-kun:
:XD: i can just see you blushing...if i had any idea what you looked like. but don't feel embaressed, it's a lovely piece, i assure you. I'm sure your girl will love it :D

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All true artists, whether they know it or not, create from a place of no-mind, from inner stillness.
:iconalpha168:
What!?!? That's OK! There's nothing wrong with that! Seriously I'm not just saying that! It really is OK, and its a great piece of poetry. I like it anyway.
:iconfriend4ever802:
Yes I call this poetry, and I think it's great :D I add to :+fav: then my friend can also read and comment

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"Change is not always a good things"
"How can I trust you if I don't trust myself"
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check my gallery and comment what ya think :)
:iconanimefreak-dracania:
Amazing, truly wonderful! She'll love it, cry while reading it and hav a happy smile when she finishes. Expressing deep feelings like that is very brave and to put it into a masterpiece like is very great.
Well done and Congrats!
:icondb6:
a very well done piece of poetry that expresses your emotions very clearly. I'm glad you have love in your life, for I am for no one due to the darkness inside me. and if you knew how bad the darkness holds me, you could see why i can't find true light to escape this nightmare realm. anyhoo great piece of poetry and keep up with your art and writing.

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We are the Seven bound by Soul, we are your Desires created by fools.
~The Seven~
"I so want kill something right now" Lord of Slaughter
:iconfan-fictionfantasy:
Wow.That was really amazing!I swear MY eyes were teary by the time I finished this.This is something anyone would be touched by.And for you to have dedicated this wonderful poem, of which likes I have never seen before and where no other could compare, to this certain women.She must be a very lucky person to have you!Trust me when I say this but......she will LOVE this.:)

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You expected something interesting? Well, too bad.

If you saw something else on here before well know this.......it was a contradiction to my first one.
:iconlightningbob:
When I started reading it I thought it might have been a wedding vow that Naruto had written himself to say to Hinata-chan. It certainly would work. If I ever write a story and it comes to a Naru/Hina wedding could I use this in it? I'll make sure I credit ya.

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People are like slinkies, pretty much useless but always brings a smile when ya push them down the stairs.


"The age of the chubby has arrived!" Akimichi Choji, Naruto, episode 58.
:iconpeexelle:
I think it's really amazing. I love the idea and I also think you expressed your emotions very well.

I'm happy for you :D

:+fav:

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:omg: :XD: --> [link] <-- :XD: :lmao:
:iconvixentfox:
We all have a dark place in our hearts that we are scared of and hide away from others. But I'm sure that you will find someone that will pierce that dark place and love you anyway.
:iconvixentfox:
Yes, I agree... but no thanks... he and I will use this ourselves. But thanks for the offer.

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