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Yup! It's finally here! :D Page 1 of Forgotten's chapter 2. This is actually the first time I've gotten to chapter 2 of any comic I've created ^^; Kinda weird, I have to say

I know, not a lotta words...but that's because a scene like this doesn't need em. And in case you didn't notice the black gutters, yes, this is still Naruto's flashback/retelling of what happened on their mission :D

Page 2 will be out sometime...but not until I can catch up on a few other things first.

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*TerriInuzuka Aug 4, 2009, 6:17:25 PM
I think it's great! Only, I would give Hinata more cheek bone. You also might want to add a few more wrinkles to their outfits. I would also make the necks a little closer to the back of their heads. I like the way you shaded it. It looks very profetional. The shines in Hinata's hair were spectacular. But I would also make Hinata's chest a little higher up. I like the way you did the metal plate on their headbands too. It looks very realistic. Other than that, when is the next one coming out? I want to see it so bad!
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~alpha168 May 30, 2009, 5:11:33 PM
What's about to happen!? AAAAAARRRGGG I can't wait!
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Mood: Love ~chuckichucho May 30, 2009, 5:13:07 PM
cool i can´t wait ^^
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~Nebula1701 May 30, 2009, 5:15:45 PM
woot!

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~smash-chan77 May 30, 2009, 5:18:21 PM
yay!! :iconfinallyplz: this page is so epic!

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~tatterpillar May 30, 2009, 5:23:18 PM
Awesome! The baddies remind me of Tonberry
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~kibaluverx22 May 30, 2009, 5:29:41 PM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!

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~Hitaro245 May 30, 2009, 5:35:32 PM
Yes yes, The new chaper begind, for end, i am a long time a wait this chaper, is so very good, i am wating the next page, really, your doujin is a very very good.
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~TanithLipsky May 30, 2009, 5:42:50 PM
wow, this looks epic.

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